Holding the Mirror Up to Nature
Some shapes cannot be seen in a glass,
those are the ones the heart breaks at.
They will never become valentines
or crucifixes, never. Night clouds
go on insanely as themselves
though metaphors would be prettier;
and when I see them massed at the edge
of the globe, neither weasel nor whale,
as though this world were, after all,
non-representational, I know
a truth that cannot be told although
I try to tell you, "We are alone,
we know nothing, nothing, we shall die
frightened in our freedom, the one
who survives will change his name
to evade the vengeance for love..."
Meanwhile the clouds go on clowning
over our heads in the floodlight of
a moon who is known to be Artemis
and Cynthia but sails away anyhow
beyond the serious poets with their
crazy ladies and cloudy histories,
their heroes in whose idiot dreams
the buzzards circle like a clock.
Some shapes cannot be seen in a glass,
those are the ones the heart breaks at.
They will never become valentines
or crucifixes, never. Night clouds
go on insanely as themselves
though metaphors would be prettier;
and when I see them massed at the edge
of the globe, neither weasel nor whale,
as though this world were, after all,
non-representational, I know
a truth that cannot be told although
I try to tell you, "We are alone,
we know nothing, nothing, we shall die
frightened in our freedom, the one
who survives will change his name
to evade the vengeance for love..."
Meanwhile the clouds go on clowning
over our heads in the floodlight of
a moon who is known to be Artemis
and Cynthia but sails away anyhow
beyond the serious poets with their
crazy ladies and cloudy histories,
their heroes in whose idiot dreams
the buzzards circle like a clock.
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Re: Holding the Mirror Up to Nature by Howard Nemerov
Fri, May 5, 2006 - 3:20 PMthx I hadn't read that before
I like the rhyme scheme, the half rhymes, but a few of the words don't work for me. What are your thoughts on this piece? -
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Re: Holding the Mirror Up to Nature by Howard Nemerov
Sat, May 6, 2006 - 2:02 AMI think it basically speaks for itself. This verse possesses a simple elegance and an unostentatious use of allusion. I like it quite a bit. Nemerov's use of imagination makes him sort of an Anti-Wallace Stevens, but as the French say, les extrêmes se touchent.
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